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Post by Foxfire on Aug 12, 2012 16:37:06 GMT -5
Name:Lio KaiserAllegiance: AutobotFunction: Warrior Alt. mode: Cybertronian Bullet Train Weapons: Various hand-held ranged weapons, Energon Battle Axe Special Abilities: Docking Command Base Height: 31 ft Quote: "One should never underestimate one's subordinates. They may just have the answer you need. Strength: 7
Intelligence: 8
Dexterity: 7
Speed: 8
Endurance: 7
Courage: 7
Firepower: 3
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 7
Rank: (6?)Profile:Lio Kaiser, most often known exclusively as Lio, has great leadership potential. He is most noticeably a career soldier. He is hardened externally, but does not let that dominate him. He treats his team like family, giving them exceptional trust. He dislikes fighting for it's own sake, but for a just cause he will fight to his last if his death will mean something. Though, he'd like to avoid this option even then... His battlefield tactics were first noted when his former team leader was slagged in an early skirmish, and he was the only one to step up to helm the team. They turned around, and tore a hole through the Decepticon lines, turning the tide of the entire battle. He was not recognized as having individual achievement enough to warrant a greater promotion than this, team leader. His convoy command base contains several weapons of various effects, most dealing low damage rapidly; Weapons that work well when used in large numbers, but fire little more than raw energon projectiles. Weapon types include automatic rifles, light machine guns, shotguns, pistols and personal defense weapons. Additionally, two heavy machine guns are mounted on either side, fanned out, and a third gunner seat is armed with guided energon rockets and faces forward. Weaknesses:It could be said Lio's greatest weakness is his trust, but additionally, his ranged combat falls incredibly short, with only proficient accuracy and sub-par weapons damage. Alright, let's take a look at this. Various hand-held ranged weapons is a rather vague term. I'd be happy if you could give me something a little more specify such as "Neutron Assault Rifle" or perhaps just an "SMG". I don't see a description of his special ability nor do I really understand his ability. Could you please include something about it in a revision? The stats check out, but I'd really like to see someone of the soldier rank from you before granted team leader status. I'm willing to give you a chance though. Make the requested changes and I'll look at it again! |
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Post by semy on Aug 12, 2012 16:42:02 GMT -5
AHAHA!
You're kidding, right? Muscle Cars on Cybertron, several millennium before they're even invented, and you're nitpicking over the names of weapons that shoot the most basic projectile described in the Aligned continuity just because they're not given a paragraph each?
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Post by Foxfire on Aug 12, 2012 16:50:33 GMT -5
AHAHA! You're kidding, right? Muscle Cars on Cybertron, several millennium before they're even invented, and you're nitpicking over the names of weapons that shoot the most basic projectile described in the Aligned continuity just because they're not given a paragraph each? I did not request a paragraph for each of your weapons, I only requested a definite number of the hand-held variety and the designations of the weapons. As for the muscle cars, it goes without saying that they are Cybertronian racers until which point we decide to move to earth. Farewell, if you cannot handle the character application process. |
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Post by shift on Aug 13, 2012 0:55:46 GMT -5
Name: Steve
Allegiance: Terrificons
Function: To exist... and to fail...
Alt. mode: Standard Cybertronian Civilian Car
Weapons: None equipped
Special Abilities: Extreme stupidity
Height: 15'
Quote: "More then meets the eyeball!"
Strength: 1
Intelligence: 1
Dexterity: 1
Speed: 1
Endurance: 1
Courage: 1
Firepower: 1
Accuracy: 1
Melee: 1
Tech Skill: 1
Charisma: 10
Rank: 1
Profile: Steve was raised from a small infant Cybertronian to an adult in the wild by the human population of Earth. Since humans were not as advanced or developed as Cybertronians, he failed to learn and grow as one and instead evolved into nothing more then scrap of little worth to any individual in the known universe. In fact, I'd be willing to bet some see scrap as more a hot commodity then Steve. Such a shame to see such a highly sophisticed piece of machinery go to waste. Maybe someone will take him in and teach him the ways of a true Cybertronian... nope! Most likely no one would care. Including me!
Weaknesses: Steve's wild upbringing resulted in him being extraordinarily weak against... well... everything. It wouldn't take much effort at all to extinguish this one's spark.
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Post by Rexacon on Aug 13, 2012 1:05:54 GMT -5
Name: Steve Allegiance: Terrificons Function: To exist... and to fail... Alt. mode: Standard Cybertronian Civilian Car Weapons: None equipped Special Abilities: Extreme stupidity Height: 15' Quote: "More then meets the eyeball!" Strength: 1
Intelligence: 1
Dexterity: 1
Speed: 1
Endurance: 1
Courage: 1
Firepower: 1
Accuracy: 1
Melee: 1
Tech Skill: 1
Charisma: 10
Rank: 1Profile: Steve was raised from a small infant Cybertronian to an adult in the wild by the human population of Earth. Since humans were not as advanced or developed as Cybertronians, he failed to learn and grow as one and instead evolved into nothing more then scrap of little worth to any individual in the known universe. In fact, I'd be willing to bet some see scrap as more a hot commodity then Steve. Such a shame to see such a highly sophisticed piece of machinery go to waste. Maybe someone will take him in and teach him the ways of a true Cybertronian... nope! Most likely no one would care. Including me! Weaknesses: Steve's wild upbringing resulted in him being extraordinarily weak against... well... everything. It wouldn't take much effort at all to extinguish this one's spark. Don't know if this was a joke, but if it was then you made me laugh. Denied. lol |
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Post by shift on Aug 13, 2012 1:16:05 GMT -5
Denied?  |
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Post by Rexacon on Aug 13, 2012 1:20:01 GMT -5
Yes shift lol
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Post by shift on Aug 13, 2012 1:23:03 GMT -5
Is his alternate mode too powerful? Should he transform into an anvil instead?
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Post by Rexacon on Aug 13, 2012 1:24:24 GMT -5
lol no, he should be a old bot that poofs out parachutes
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Post by shift on Aug 13, 2012 1:25:40 GMT -5
Then he wouldn't be able to fall towards his untimely death.
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