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And i'm done

[Deleted]

Sorry to intrude but, I haven't received a grade yet for one of my characters. It is the first one on page 30.

[Cutlass Rebooted]

?!? Really? I'll get on that...

[Cutlass Rebooted]

Jun 20, 2014 11:00:14 GMT -5 @applebutterz said:

Name: Jacknife "Jackie"
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Wrecker/ Assassination
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Bike
Earth Alt: Dark red Kawasaki sports bike with golden painted rims
Weapons: (She is more of an in your face bladed weapon cutting you into peices type fighter than an in your face blow your head off with a blaster type of fighter. She doesn't really take interest in firearm weapons at the slightest but has a few in at her disposal.)

Primary Firearm: ION Blaster (burst action), a well built trigger-finger pistol that shoots powerful ION blasts. The rate between each shot depends on the user's speed pulling the trigger. This gun is dead on accuraaye with a built in coolant system to decrease unneeded problems. Low recoil, medium power and damage, Accurate.

Secondary Firearm: Wrist Launching-Utility Gun, Is a wrist attached weapon that fires a variety of specialized charges. These charges can range from EMP, Mini Sensors, Flash Bangs, Scanners, Smokes, and Flares. It can be attached and detached by a clip to lock it on. With an easy access format to pick the type of charge that is being fired.

Primary Close-Quarters: Two long energon katanas that are connected to Jackie's back. There are two much smaller katanas that are strapped to her thighs as well just in case.

Secondary Close-Quarters: Jacknife has a secondary compartment that holds different kinds of energon shuriken to use at her own will:

Normal: Standard-style throwing stars used to cut or silent kill enemy that they are thrown at with a good aim.
Shuri-Rang: A much larger shuriken that starts of as a small disk in the users hand. The extracts three deadly blades in mid air to pierce, cut, or silent kill and opponent. This weapon is special and, is one of the personal favorites of Jacknife because it flys back to the user and retracts its blades before it cuts him or her.
Time Bomb: A shuriken slightly larger than a normal one with similar attributes except it explodes with a 5 second time delay.
Shock: A shuriken slightly larger than a normal one with similar attributes except it shocks the opponent. It is only ment to distract or knock out the enemy. However if way to many are connect at once the shock frequency may kill the victim.


Special Abilities: Cloak
Height: 27ft
Quote: (Jackie normally does not talk. It is rare to ever see or even get a positive reaction out of her because she usually has her metallic battle mask on where ever she goes.)

Offensive: "You dare to challenge me?? Well then shall I show you what a wrecker is capable of?"
"If you do not run then you can not hide."
"My style in battle will be far more complicated than you would suspect."
Defensive: "You prove formidable in combat but, now I must end you right here."
"I may have under estimated you but, now we shall see what you are capable of."
"Don't get cocky for I have just begun to show my true skill."
Change-of-form: "Let us be quick with speedy motions."
"I will prove to be hard to catch."
"My wheels spin for speed and nothing more."
Near Death/ Low on Energon: "One way of another you will...DIE!!!"
"Sadly I must inform that I am near death."
"The Autobot cause will not falter even if I am not here to assist them!"
"Finish me off if you aren't the spineless coward I suspect you to be!"

Strength: 5
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 7
Speed: 10
Endurance: 5
Courage: 7
Firepower: 3
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 7
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 3
Rank: Jackie is aimed to be a skilled traditional melee fighter for the Wrecker Team. And is to be a well-known "Commando/Commander" for her calm nature. So I hope she can get that rank

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Profile: Jacknife is a femmebot that spends most of her time doing things her own silent way then any other. Even though Jackie will show respect to her superiors that doesn't nessecarily mean she really cares. Not that many Autobots have ever gotten her to lighten up and not be so uptight all the time. And the odd part is; she barely even talks. Dedicated to the silent and agile live style Jacknife has been know to just get things done and then expect for her to be left the scrap alone. She isn't really a social person at all which makes her hard to be around for whatever purpose. Ever since she had been apart of the wreckers team Jackie has been looked down on. Ever since then she has trained non-stop over and over to hone her melee combat skills. Eventually Jackie had become a very dangerous fighter to be in a tangle with up close. Most times when leading a team Jackie is mostly the one to be doing the crazy heavy lifting while having another well taught bot do the ordering for her. She can be a great leader if she wanted to but, mostly Jacknife just doesn't care what so ever. Jackie normally doesn't spend her time doing anything exciting. And tough luck for all the male Autobots that try to sweep her off her feet because Jacknife is also know to be hard to please however most of that is because she doesn't like to express herself in anyway besides her deadly blades and combat efficiency.

Weaknesses: All though she has the great female charm her slim size hinders her use of big bulky armour to protect her from major damage. So If you manage to even hit Jackie you may end up sending her some where farther than you expected since she is so light. With all that speed Jacknife is not so good in strength. She may not be able to hit super hard with bare hands but, those blades of hers are there for a reason. And you better believe that she knows how to use them. Jackie is also someone who doesn't like to lose battles if she feels she can get a victory which is pretty much all the time. So through willpower, determination, and confidence she will stop almost at nothing to win a fight. With that kind of motive she may get carried away and or manipulated into trying to win a fight way too much and leave herself open for anything her oppenent feels like doing if they are clever enough. Also one major weakness is Jackie's social skills. She can get enraged quite easily and, is in no way a social person. So most times it is hard for her to work with others.
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So far your stats total 64 which is In-Training. Commander is 76. Since Towreck is in charge of the bots you might want to check with him about that rank. Other than the stat/rank issue I see no other problems.

[Dr Virtual]

Name: Hardhead
Allegiance: Decepticon(Insecticon)
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Rhino Beetle
Weapons: Riot Cannon, Neutron Assault Rifle, a sword
Special Ability: Extreme Durability.
Height: 32ft
Quote: "Even some of the autobots will go to the pits"

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 4
Dexterity: 3
Speed: 4
Endurance: 10
Courage: 7
Firepower: 6
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 7
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 4
Rank: 1

Overall: 63

 
Profile:

Appearance:

Hardhead is a honorable mech choosing to attack when he is attacked. He sees using a gun during melee to be a dishonor. He isn't evil but that doesn't mean he is nice. Hardhead will grant a honorable death to those who deserve it.

Weapons

Riot Cannon:

Modified fusion rocket launcher, its enhanced rumbler propels rockets forward at extremely high speeds

Neutron Assault Rifle:

The Neutron Assault Rifle distorts the equilibrium of its target by blasting it with sonic booms

Hardhead has a large metal shield which he uses in combat. It is square in shape.

Biography: Hardhead was sparked inside of a insecticon hive before the Gold Age had ended. Giving the job of a warrior Hardhead's main goal along with other warriors was to protect his hive with his life. Not many disturbances worth mentioning happened. When the war first began the hive was quick to ally with the decepticon army. Later on Hardhead was transferred to a decepticon prison as a guard. While he was stationed there the decepticon traitor Astrinal who was previously captured in said prison. Started a break out which resulted in a large portion of the prisoners escaping. Hardhead encountered Astrinal during this break out and fought her in combat and defeated her but before he could destroy her he was forced back by prisoners who came to assist Astrinal. After the prison break Hardhead was transferred to front line battles. He will continue to fight for the decepticon cause until his spark is extinguished.

Weaknesses: Hardhead is a slow mech in the speed sense. He'll have trouble fighting a smaller and faster cybertronian. Hardhead's code of honor can be exploited in combat or out of combat. Due to his insecticon instincts Hardhead will rush into battle without a plan first.

[Rexacon]

Jul 15, 2014 18:49:16 GMT -5 Dr Virtual said:

Name: Hardhead
Allegiance: Decepticon(Insecticon)
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Rhino Beetle
Weapons: Riot Cannon, Neutron Assault Rifle, a sword
Special Ability: Extreme Durability.
Height: 32ft
Quote: "Even some of the autobots will go to the pits"

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 4
Dexterity: 3
Speed: 4
Endurance: 10
Courage: 7
Firepower: 6
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 7
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 4
Rank: N/A

Overall: 62


Profile:

Appearance: View Attachment

Hardhead is a honorable mech choosing to attack when he is attacked. He sees using a gun during melee to be a dishonor. He isn't evil but that doesn't mean he is nice. Hardhead will grant a honorable death to those who deserve it.

Weapons

Riot Cannon:

Modified fusion rocket launcher, its enhanced rumbler propels rockets forward at extremely high speeds

Neutron Assault Rifle:

The Neutron Assault Rifle distorts the equilibrium of its target by blasting it with sonic booms

Biography: Hardhead was sparked inside of a insecticon hive before the Gold Age had ended. Giving the job of a warrior Hardhead's main goal along with other warriors was to protect his hive with his life. Not many disturbances worth mentioning happened. When the war first began the hive was quick to ally with the decepticon army. Later on Hardhead was transferred to a decepticon prison as a guard. While he was stationed there the decepticon traitor Astrinal who was previously captured in said prison. Started a break out which resulted in a large portion of the prisoners escaping. Hardhead encountered Astrinal during this break out and fought her in combat and defeated her but before he could destroy her he was forced back by prisoners who came to assist Astrinal. After the prison break Hardhead was transferred to front line battles. He will continue to fight for the decepticon cause until his spark is extinguished.

Weaknesses: Hardhead is a slow mech in the speed sense. He'll have trouble fighting a smaller and faster cybertronian. Hardhead's code of honor can be exploited in combat or out of combat. Due to his insecticon instincts Hardhead will rush into battle without a plan first.

Rank 1 which is civilian

Profile is good, go ahead and update roll call and post in archives.

[Towreck]

Jun 20, 2014 11:00:14 GMT -5 @applebutterz said:

Name: Jacknife "Jackie"
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Wrecker/ Assassination
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Bike
Earth Alt: Dark red Kawasaki sports bike with golden painted rims
Weapons: (She is more of an in your face bladed weapon cutting you into peices type fighter than an in your face blow your head off with a blaster type of fighter. She doesn't really take interest in firearm weapons at the slightest but has a few in at her disposal.)

Primary Firearm: ION Blaster (burst action), a well built trigger-finger pistol that shoots powerful ION blasts. The rate between each shot depends on the user's speed pulling the trigger. This gun is dead on accuraaye with a built in coolant system to decrease unneeded problems. Low recoil, medium power and damage, Accurate.

Secondary Firearm: Wrist Launching-Utility Gun, Is a wrist attached weapon that fires a variety of specialized charges. These charges can range from EMP, Mini Sensors, Flash Bangs, Scanners, Smokes, and Flares. It can be attached and detached by a clip to lock it on. With an easy access format to pick the type of charge that is being fired.

Primary Close-Quarters: Two long energon katanas that are connected to Jackie's back. There are two much smaller katanas that are strapped to her thighs as well just in case.

Secondary Close-Quarters: Jacknife has a secondary compartment that holds different kinds of energon shuriken to use at her own will:

Normal: Standard-style throwing stars used to cut or silent kill enemy that they are thrown at with a good aim.
Shuri-Rang: A much larger shuriken that starts of as a small disk in the users hand. The extracts three deadly blades in mid air to pierce, cut, or silent kill and opponent. This weapon is special and, is one of the personal favorites of Jacknife because it flys back to the user and retracts its blades before it cuts him or her.
Time Bomb: A shuriken slightly larger than a normal one with similar attributes except it explodes with a 5 second time delay.
Shock: A shuriken slightly larger than a normal one with similar attributes except it shocks the opponent. It is only ment to distract or knock out the enemy. However if way to many are connect at once the shock frequency may kill the victim.


Special Abilities: Cloak
Height: 27ft
Quote: (Jackie normally does not talk. It is rare to ever see or even get a positive reaction out of her because she usually has her metallic battle mask on where ever she goes.)

Offensive: "You dare to challenge me?? Well then shall I show you what a wrecker is capable of?"
"If you do not run then you can not hide."
"My style in battle will be far more complicated than you would suspect."
Defensive: "You prove formidable in combat but, now I must end you right here."
"I may have under estimated you but, now we shall see what you are capable of."
"Don't get cocky for I have just begun to show my true skill."
Change-of-form: "Let us be quick with speedy motions."
"I will prove to be hard to catch."
"My wheels spin for speed and nothing more."
Near Death/ Low on Energon: "One way of another you will...DIE!!!"
"Sadly I must inform that I am near death."
"The Autobot cause will not falter even if I am not here to assist them!"
"Finish me off if you aren't the spineless coward I suspect you to be!"

Strength: 5
Intelligence: 10
Dexterity: 10
Speed: 10
Endurance: 5
Courage: 10
Firepower: 3
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 10
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 3
Rank: Jackie is aimed to be a skilled traditional melee fighter for the Wrecker Team. And is to be a well-known "Commando/Commander" for her calm nature. So I hope she can get that rank

Profile: Jacknife is a femmebot that spends most of her time doing things her own silent way then any other. Even though Jackie will show respect to her superiors that doesn't nessecarily mean she really cares. Not that many Autobots have ever gotten her to lighten up and not be so uptight all the time. And the odd part is; she barely even talks. Dedicated to the silent and agile live style Jacknife has been know to just get things done and then expect for her to be left the scrap alone. She isn't really a social person at all which makes her hard to be around for whatever purpose. Ever since she had been apart of the wreckers team Jackie has been looked down on. Ever since then she has trained non-stop over and over to hone her melee combat skills. Eventually Jackie had become a very dangerous fighter to be in a tangle with up close. Most times when leading a team Jackie is mostly the one to be doing the crazy heavy lifting while having another well taught bot do the ordering for her. She can be a great leader if she wanted to but, mostly Jacknife just doesn't care what so ever. Jackie normally doesn't spend her time doing anything exciting. And tough luck for all the male Autobots that try to sweep her off her feet because Jacknife is also know to be hard to please however most of that is because she doesn't like to express herself in anyway besides her deadly blades and combat efficiency.

Weaknesses: All though she has the great female charm her slim size hinders her use of big bulky armour to protect her from major damage. So If you manage to even hit Jackie you may end up sending her some where farther than you expected since she is so light. With all that speed Jacknife is not so good in strength. She may not be able to hit super hard with bare hands but, those blades of hers are there for a reason. And you better believe that she knows how to use them. Jackie is also someone who doesn't like to lose battles if she feels she can get a victory which is pretty much all the time. So through willpower, determination, and confidence she will stop almost at nothing to win a fight. With that kind of motive she may get carried away and or manipulated into trying to win a fight way too much and leave herself open for anything her oppenent feels like doing if they are clever enough. Also one major weakness is Jackie's social skills. She can get enraged quite easily and, is in no way a social person. So most times it is hard for her to work with others.

Mmm, judging off of Abyss grade, it is a good character, and her being a Wrecker...I like. Ive always considered Towreck as a Wrecker, so having another one wouldnt be so bad. Also, I myself would not have a problem with a commander. She can help out Towreck when needed, and can even be in charge of a small team if the Autobots ever split into groups out on the field. The only thing I will need is for you to RP getting to the Commander Position. This way I can be sure you can handle the rank or not.

So, bring her stats to 76, Post in the Archives, Update the Roll Call, and then we shall RP your progress to Commander. Towreck will test you and give you tasks before officially 'Promoting' you. Dont expect it to be immediate promotion, it will come over time. Not too long, but you get the picture

Accepted

[Ironshot]

Name: Old Red
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: medic/tracker
Alt-mode: hound dog
Weaponry:
2x shoulder mounted missile launchers, tail integrated surgical laser, various paw integrated medical tools
Special Ability:
Above average sensory  (hearing and smell)
Height:
5ft
Quote:
“What‘s the damage?”
Strength: 4
Intelligence: 8
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 8
Endurance: 4
Courage: 5
Firepower: 4
Accuracy: 10
Melee: 4
Tech Skill: 10
Charisma: 5
Rank: 0 or 5
Profile:
Considered one of the top minicon medics on Cybertron, Old Red is more than a few millennia older than the conflict between Autobots and Decepticons though no one knows just how old he is or even what his original designation was. Content to repair the injured, if it wasn’t for the war he never would have realized the full potential of his tracking skills. During the evacuation of Cybertron, Old Red boarded the Autobot flagship and rode it to Velocitron where he managed to get a chassis upgrade that optimized his top speed before he gained permission to take a minicon friendly shuttle on a private mission. That mission is a highly ambitious attempt to track down the lost colonies along with any useful artifacts. Blind luck led him to a distant planet far outside known space just in time to help the Autobots in retrieving the Allspark.
Weaknesses:
Low firepower, strength, melee ability and endurance in addition to an aversion to fighting.

[rampage]

Name: Rampage

*Canon Rampage was an experiment with a particularly bright green immortal spark and matching optics, and a cannibalistic nature, Megatron kept a piece of Rampage's spark to keep him in line (by squeezing it if he misbehaved). Obviously he was at best a reluctant Decepticon. Now, to me, immortality is boring, so I hope you guys don't mind me reinventing Rampage a little. I like spark absorption (parts of) better than cannibalism, and it might be fun to have some unintended side effects..


Allegiance: Predacon (Autobot or 'Con whatever you guys need more of.. I could even have 'Page switch along the way??)

Function: Interrogator and mnemo-analyst. His specialty is weaking an opponent, understanding what makes them tick, and figure out what they need to become more apt to spill the beans.. 

Alt-mode: Dragon

Weaponry: Plasma cannon (fire breath spewn from throat..), tail spike that can be whipped and well.. it stings anyway.. teeth, and plating (scales)..

Special Ability: Temporarily "linking" with another and absorbing some of other bot's spark energy, while it doesn't require invasive "probing"of any kind, it does require all of Rampage's concentration, working a bit like a psychic cortical link, speeding up Rampage's self repair, but also taking on some of the victim's attributes.

Height: hmm. Shorter than average and slender?  More scalpel than sledgehammer..

Quotes:
"I have fire in my spark.. what's in yours?"
"Did you just say I have "bad breath" *growls*"
"I do not know this "Puff" you speak of.. must be one of Shockwave's.."


Strength: 4
Intelligence: 9
Dexterity: 7
Speed:5
Endurance: 7
Courage: 6
Firepower: 6
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 3
Tech Skill:5
Charisma: 7
Rank: ??

More than happy to adjust points as needed... just made this up as I went to show relative strengths and weaknesses...

Profile: Rampage is a Predacon before all else. His allegiance to either Autobot or Decepticon is second-best but he's smart enough to know how to play both sides against each other. Rampage's strengths are also his weaknesses, he understands what moves a bot's spark, maybe too well at times. Having a negative history with scientists, he doesn't trust easily but will endeavor to keep his word if freely given.

Weaknesses:
Physically Rampage has a long slender neck and while scaled is *not* the most heavily armored bot.
Rampage also feels lost in the sensations and emotions of others.
Using his plasma breath for too long scorches his throat and messes with his voice for a while.
He is easily distracted, and exits links at least as disoriented as his target. He also has to hold still and seriously concentrate while linking and has to be relatively close to his target. In battle this ability is obviously mostly useless. 
He is also seriously on the fence when it comes to the Autobot and Decepticon sides, and as such he might accidentally "spill those beans" himself when working with a subject.. figuring they already worked it out anyway.. 
He's also very afraid of medics *nervously eyeballs previous poster* and anything resembling a medical facility..
Rampage is definitely trying to find out who "Rampage" really is.. understanding others comes a lot easier than understanding himself.. 

Let me know what you guys think

[rampage]

Woops.. and then I noticed the line about no canon names.. so I was brainstorming.. nightshade? Nope Darkspark (an everquest character from about 13 ish? Years ago? Rise of the Darkspark.. ugh.. I'll think of something to name 'Page... lol (there is always "puff" I suppose...) XD as for the rest.. let me know what you think?

Also my ISP is down so I'm stuck with my phone and college interwebby until I can get it fixed..
I'll be checking in but can't see things like the shoutbox..